Journalism 20 -- Lecture Notes
Copyright 1998, 1999, 2000, 2001 by Rich Cameron
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Last updated February 3, 2001

Copy Editing


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While the use of computers, spellcheckers and the such make creating error-free documents easier these days, it is still valuable to know how to properly edit paper copy. There are two aspects to that process:

  • Knowing what and how to change copy, and,
  • Knowing how to change copy so that others understand.

To do the latter, we use copy editing symbols.

Copy editing symbols are often confused with proofreading symbols. Copy editing symbols were designed to be used after you typed a story, usually double spaced, to correct errors or indicate changes in your copy. Proofreading symbols were designed to be used in tighter spaces to indicate errors in typeset copy, which is usually in smaller type, single spaced and in narrow columns. The proofreading symbols often have to be inserted in margins because of the tightness of space.

On one hand, you could say that since we often see copy editing symbols and proofreading symbols mixed together, why worry about the difference? On the other hand, it is always best to show how intellegent you are by doing things correctly.

And while most of your assignments will be submitted in electronic form and won't need copy editing symbols, the assignments in the first chapter of your workbook teach you the correct symbols for most copy editing. Since copy editing requires pen or pencil on paper, distance education students will have to complete these assignments on paper and mail or fax them in. We'll go through that chapter quickly and move on.

You can find a list of sample copy editing symbols on page 5 of your workbook. Let's go over them. I will be changing some of the symbols you see in the book because, quite frankly, I think some of them are sloppy. Minor changes can make them more readable. Please compare the symbols below with the ones in your workbook.

PARAGRAPHS
One of the clearest examples of how proofreading symbols and copy editing symbols differ is in marking paragraphs. You've no doubt seen this character for paragraphing.

¦


Well it is a proofreading mark. The proper copy editing mark is

Paragraph mark


CAPITALIZATION
We'll talk about capitalization rules when we get to AP Style, but if you accidently (or mistakenly) type a capital letter that needs to be lower case you mark through it, thusly

Lowercase it


On the other hand, if you type a lower case letter that needs to be capitalized you place three small lines under the letters to be capitalized.

Capitalize it


THE MAGIC CIRCLE
A handy copy editing symbol is the circle. If you need to abbreviate something that is spelled out, you just need to circle it.

Abbreviate it

If it is already abbreviated and you need to spell it out, the circle works again.

Spell it out

This trick even works for numbers. We'll discuss when to use a figure or to spell out a number later, but if you need to do the opposite of what you typed, you would simply circle it.

Make it a number
Spell the number

In other words, the circle pretty much means do the opposite. Be warned, though, you cannot use the circle to mean the opposite when it comes to capitalization. If you circled a letter to be capitalized or lowercased, technically you'd be saying to abbreviate that letter . . . which makes no sense. DO NOT use the circle for capitalization problems.

DELETIONS
A common use of copy editing symbols is to delete copy, whether you simply don't need it or you made a mistake. The next few symbols help with deletions. The important thing to keep in mind is that when you delete something, you need to account for its space. For instance, if you delete a word, you've got to close up the space for normal spacing. You do this by building a bridge over the deletion, like this

Deleting a word

The same type of bridge is required if you are simply deleting an unnecessary space or punctuation.

Deleting punctuation

Even if you are deleting quote marks you'd simply obliterate the marks and close the space with a bridge if you can. In this example, for instance, you can close the gap with the first deletion, but there is no place to build a bridge to on the right. You DON'T need to build a bridge unless there is something to build a bridge to.

Deleting quote marks

 

 

But suppose the deletion is simply at the end of a line or at the beginning of a line WITHIN a paragraph. Then you'd use a giant S like this
Deleting at the end of a line
or
Deleting at the beginning of a line

You DON'T need the giant S if you delete at the end of a line and the next line is the start of a new paragraph.

Just remember to build a bridge for NORMAL spacing when you can.

But suppose you are deleting a letter in a word. You need to not only close the gap, you need to close it completely. So you build a bridge over the top and and foundation under the bottom.

Closing the space completely

INSERTIONS
Still another common use of copy editing symbols is to insert material you either left out or later decide should have been included. Some insertions, such as words or phrases and some punctuation marks are inserted from above. Others, such as much punctuation, are inserted from below.

Here is one area I am going to teach something other than what is in the workbook. I think some of the slash marks for insertion that you see are quite sloppy and can lead to mistakes. Instead, I think it is better to encase insertions from above in a three-sided box. For instance, if you need to insert a letter or word, it would look like this:

Inserting a word

The three-sided box concept really takes on special meaning when you have to insert several words or a phrase:

Inserting a phrase

But also use the three-sided box for single letters and those punctuation marks that come from above --such as a question mark, exclamation mark, hyphens, dashes and apostrophes.

Note the caret below the line indicating where the insertion is to take place. This is VERY IMPORTANT.

Quote marks are inserted from above, too, but they require special attention. This is because when a story is typeset there are special quotes for beginning quote marks and another set of quotes for closing quote marks. A two-side box with the open end away from the sentence helps determine which is which:

Inserting quote marks

Again note the carets below the line. They indicate exact placement of inserts. Apostrophes and quote marks are good examples of why the caret is needed. In these examples, for instance, the placement of the apostrophe results in entirely different meanings.

Posessive and Plural posessive

Are we talking about one boy or more than one boy? Placement of the apostrophe tells us.

With quote marks we need to indicate placement, too, especially with closing quote marks and other punctuation, such as periods. We'll go into the reasons why later, but just remember that in journalism writing, we ALWAYS put the period or comma, etc., INSIDE the quote marks. So note the placement of the caret in the quote mark example above.

Distinguishing between a hyphen and dash is important. One joins words, the other separates ideas. To simply draw a line for a dash or a hyphen can be confusing. How long is a dash? How long is a hyphen? So with copy editing we distinguish between the two by using two lines on top of each other for hyphens and two lines next to each other for dashes.

Inserting hyphens
Inserting dashes

Don't ask me how you insert an equal size. I don't know.

Commas, periods, colons, semicolons, etc. are inserted below. They are such lowly characters. Encase the punctuation mark in the caret. The examples in your workbook use wimpy carets and places the punctuation marks rather high, so that they look like letters in a word. Lower them a bit and use a nice big caret. IMAGINE putting a line across the bottom and encasing the mark in a triangle.

Commas
Colons
Semicolons

Periods are special cases again. To just put a dot on the paper wouldn't always work. It might get lost. So for periods we put a small x that has a circle around it. NO, it DOES NOT mean to abbreviate the x!


Inserting periods

It is always a good idea to encase the mark in a caret, too, to show exact placement. This is really important in tight spaces.

Inserting periods

MISCELLANEOUS
That's most of them. But there are a few miscellaneous marks to learn.

If you accidentially make a change, but realize you had it correct to begin with, you can undo the change by writing "stet" above it and circle it. "Stet" is Latin for "leave it as it was." Of course, "stet" only works if the original version is still readable.

STET


And if you run across an unusual spelling of something, you can indicate that you've checked it out and your version is correct by writing "cq" for "checked" above the questionable material and circling it.

cq

When you get to the bottom of a page and there is a another page, you indicate it by writing in "more" and circling it (NO, you are not abbreviating it!)

More

When the story is done you indicate it with a hash mark or the time-honored "30".

Hash mark

-30-


If you TYPE the hash mark, it is probably a good idea to type three of them:

Hashmarks

Answer and e-mail the following questions to me.

  1. What is the difference between proofreading marks and copy editing marks?

  2. What does circling something mean?

  3. Where does punctuation, such as comma or a period, go in relation to quote marks?

    rCameron@cerritos.edu